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We booked a studio at this hotel last minute during our spring trip because my daughter was having a severe allergic reaction. Unfortunately, we were assigned a first-floor room tucked into a corner of the building that felt like a cave—there was virtually no natural light, even with the curtains open, and the room had a damp smell.
As a frequent traveler, I’m usually not too particular—I just need a clean, comfortable place to sleep. However, given my daughter’s asthma, the poor air quality and lack of sunlight made this room especially unsuitable.
As soon as we walked in, I called the front desk, explained our situation, and asked if we could switch to a room with better natural light. The staff member paused briefly, and I initially thought they would accommodate us, but instead I was told no—this was the only studio available. This was frustrating, as their website and other booking platforms still showed studio rooms for sale at the time.
To be fair, the room itself was clean, and the bedding and pillows were soft and comfortable. However, I wish the staff had been more understanding and better trained to handle situations like this with a bit more empathy, rather than coming across as cold and dismissive. And "